back to kinda dropping the ball. mostly. just finished drawing this and the following 6. sooo. lotta progress. but feeling very rushed. (they get better, strangely enough) (likely because they get much more simple).
this sequence isn’t fully drawn. and no words again. despite my plan to put them in later.
basically, i’m not “feeling” the words. i know that’s a fail.
i’m a shitty writer. need to wait till the words come.
my script here has the alarm blaring again, about intruders entering the base.
the idea is that it snaps him out of his revenge focus a little. he yells into a CB radio about “guards on alert! man your posts!”
and he flips switches to set retaliations in motion.
…hard to make that all sound poetical.
- In the first frame, he dumps puman on a table/slab. kinda like aneman before him.
- In the final frame, we’re supposed to see the wife still unconscious: in a room quickly filling with flames.